the bodies/people are great and realistic. As for the water it seems you copied it way too many times and rushed it a little. The ship is fine and the clouds was just okay. But like you said this is old but the people are astounding.
On, vaihtoehtoinen title olisi ollut 'The last siren' joka sitten kertoisikin jo jotain. Paska mäihä rakastua sireeniin, eiku seireeniin. Kele, hämäävä sana.
(Love the hair and the ship)
Ja jälleen kerran pakko pistää